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Abigail's avatar

I can't help but hear a Lonesome Dove reading of "poke your pate" which is appropriately inappropriate.

Robert Charboneau's avatar

Yeah pate is maybe too hokey, but I liked the sound with “made” and “poke” was too good.

Abigail's avatar

It works for me. Reading the poem with the voice of Gus is very satisfying.

Josh Datko's avatar

I know you know this, but I really enjoy this series. :) I saw your longer America one and just hadn’t had the chance to fully read it yet.

Robert Charboneau's avatar

Thanks Josh. I appreciate it.