The Landscape
Prologue — Ch 1: Orus the Redwood
Though leaves are many, the root is one;
Through all the lying days of my youth
I swayed my leaves and flowers in the sun;
Now I may wither into the truth.
—Yeats
Sunny are the banks of the Sink that lie along the pooling-riffling Creek. The Sun’s light is broken on the floor by stag-horned crowns of oak whose crooked arms and tutting fingers cannot catch all its wealth. Live oak and white and black and valley oak clutching whorled greens and bearded moss, plaited with scales, adorned in honors of lichen. Octopus roots breaking the subsoil. Their habits confounding as hieroglyphs. The significance of their petrified postures invisible to our brief spans of time. Between them stand gray towers of tanoaks and white alders. Below the treeline, thickets of berry shrubs, salmon and huckle and elder and gooseberry, and oceanspray and nettle, and skunk cabbage and cattail, and stalks of orchids and yellow monkey flowers. A mosaic populace of plants, many who lose their leaves and go to sleep in fall. Riparian plants of all shapes and cycles girding the floodplains of the Creek, drinking from its softened beds, reaching hooked arms over its life-giving stream. So Orus joined his grove to the closest bank of the Creek, where north and south tributes converge in one course that rushes west through the prairielands, and empties into the Sea’s maw its spring and alpine waters. There he held counsel with the Mother Tree, a grizzled canyon live oak named Orchard, a tree beset with troubles, plagued with factious tribes of plants east and west. Orchard’s habit, four stubby trunks that split and held their twisting crown aloft— branching into myriad arthritic hands that bore sparse bouquets of toothy leaves— looked as tortured as a hunchback stamped with the punishments of sore misfortune that cracked and arched his many backs until his body splayed ope for all to see. Orus made his brief plea to the live oak, asking through a channel of tangled roots that water might be siphoned to his grove for the Hill was parched and in great need of it. He spoke with eloquence and modesty beyond his age, but Orchard was unmoved. “What artless voice have I lent the audience of my roots to?” cried the oak. Earth shook and trembled round for plants to hear. “What fruit unripened on the vine begs my aid? I hear the innocent cry of a whelp, a child’s burdensome helplessness, bringing no offering in return but his begging. A redwood, no less! From that windy Hill that calls itself the center of our Watershed. Many seasons have passed since a voice from Middle Hill has bothered calling out to the Creek. Not since old Plantagenet lost his hold on the Sink and the banks broke out in civil war. Not since the houses of Yellow Cup and Brown Cup were formed, our two cadet branches splitting the woods into warring East and West Creek factions, vying for the throne of the Mother Tree whose hollow crown I wear upon my head. Of what help has Middle Hill been to us? It was trees from your land who lost the treeship. The crimes of Hammett hang on your trunk! The crimes committed on the Northern Ridge. Who would trust a tree from Middle Hill? Who would give fresh water freely to such self-absorbed plants? I would sooner uproot myself, would sooner throw myself down than give aid to the likes of you, keehl.” The forest grew lively, bristling in the river breeze, their roots and crowns aquiver with intrigue. So long had they been at odds with trees on the west bank of the Creek, with the Brown Cups and their Lord Onion, a round and cunning tanoak who claimed to be the rightful Mother Tree of the Sink. So long had both sides fought a bitter feud, a war of plant succession, with each side gaining some, then losing some other ground. Prolonged trench war fought across the Creek, with seeds carried by the drifting air, dropped behind enemy lines that, over centuries, claiming parcels on the shore, creeping inland, sowed confusion and strife among themselves and made the Creek in spring a dangerous place to be. Then Orus replied: “Great oak, humbly I make my request before yourself and all riparian trees of the Sink. I know the woods are not well. I know the Watershed is divided, and our stands stand disconnected. The tallest trees in my grove do not answer. They seem to live only in their crowns and cannot hear our calls, or refuse them. That’s why we built this road and joined ours to yours, because plantlife thrives together, and together we can work to end our woes. I don’t know the trees of whom you speak who planted this enmity between us. They were before my time. I knew them not. But make a pact with me, not with them. Not with ghosts. The things plants do before us should not determine our habits, nor block the neighborly roots of ours from linking. They should not deter us from new bonds, new communities that, by their linking, undo old wrongs with honest compact. Give us some water from your riverbed and, in time, you’ll find us equal to the gift.” Now Orchard thought to himself awhile, in the privacy of his crown where thoughts are secreted. “The treeling’s more naive than even I supposed! Mewling about unity and fraternity of trees. He must be no taller than a shrub to believe in such ridiculous things. Or… or he’s more clever than I realize. New alliances and new bonds disguise old crimes and old wrongs. Has he run afoul of his allies, and seeks new ones? Does he play the upright tree for sympathy? I might use him to my own advantage. The Green Spirit knows how much flora I’ve made use of and then discarded. How many bonds I most wickedly cut…” Then Orchard spoke through his roots: “Redwood, I will know you, and from where you come. Although you think it not worth knowing, the things plants do do not end with them. The sins of our forebears are alive with us, housed in seeds that grow long after their limbs, petrified, are ashed in fire, or windthrown. They poison us and turn the wood rotten. So I will know what kind of plant you are. How ringed with age. Of what composition your soil consists. I will know whether hardwood or softwood girds your pith. Nearer the river stands a wise yew tree. Oannes, my advisor. Speak with him. He will know what you are. He will test you. If I find his report to my liking you and I will have further to discuss.” So Orus went to speak to the wise yew. For many days his shade, his sylvan sprite, continued through the fungal nets woven through the bank. It was late in spring then. The air was humid and thick with pollen, and the bustling roots underneath threw Orus into confusion. Lost among mineral highways and dens of rumor, of plants at war devising and scheming. Tenuous were the ties of community, for who trusted their neighbor’s loyalty when, years later, they might switch sides and cede the land to enemy seeds? And everywhere his spirit went there was gossip of rebellion and conspiracy, Until at last, along the cool edges of the bank, where water laps and smoothes the pebbles of the bar, he met the wise Oannes, advisor to the Mother Tree. An old pacific yew, Oannes had lived many centuries, and knew many things. His habit, like two long hands extending in supplication to the river god, reaching out over the rushing stream, as if waiting to receive the leaping salmon that leapt into the wide, flat palms of his trunks. His bark was smooth as ebony, with many chartaceous scrolls of peeling red, with oyster mushrooms crowding his balconies. Oannes the Teacher, many called him, though his roots no longer reached as wide as they had before, and his voice no longer carried into the roots of plants at war. But Orchard kept him in his retinue because he was wise and unambitious. He had lived many centuries and knew many things, and he saw clearly into the heartwood of trees. Now Orus explained to Oannes how and why he’d come, how Orchard said he should be tested, and Oannes, with firmly rooted voice and deep-feeling root hairs that vibrated into Orus’s shade, replied: “And what kind of tree are ye, redwood? For what purpose have ye led plants down the Middle Hill to the warring floodplains? Have ye come for conquest and the glory of yer grove? To sound yer name from afar like a warcry, with armies marching down the foothills? Did ye reach yer roots to ours to plant yer plants in victory across the troubled towns of our riverine realm? Seek ye to exploit us? To speak like a friend, make generous, false promises, and from under our crowns rob the earth like a baron? I warn ye there’s naught worth having here that will not cost ye more than its fair price, for plants so long at war win diminishing gains, until they hold the spoils of the floor in terror and blight. Such has it been since old Plantagenet, the gold-leafed chinkapin, lost his crown.” The oyster mushrooms on Oannes dipped their bells to hear mention of the chinkapin. “I was but a young tree when he fell, after the power of the Mother Trees was forsaken, after their influence over the weather and the woods was taken in punishment by the Great Green for our sins. The Creek dried and sank beneath the bar. And Old Plantagenet, impotent, fearful of uprising, abolished the Potlatches, declaring all successors to the throne should be his offspring, no longer chosen by the will of plants but descended from one tree alone, from the line of himself. How well that went! How like a mouse who, pursued at night by two owls, narrowly escapes the talons of one only to be ensnared by the other. Plants rebelled and cast him from the soil, uprooting the once honorable limbs that delusion had withered and hollowed. Since then, how many trees claim to be his heir? How many risen and fallen have greedily staked their share of the Creek, Yellow Cup and Brown Cup alike, sprawling out their roots in bitter warfare, embattled, all the while hoping to satisfy their desires at the expense of all, until their foul reigns end in violence, and dishonored Earth will not keep them, and they fall.” Lost in reminiscence, plants around the yew slouched, grew sullen. Sunlight bright and diffuse through the low canopy gave to the floor the air of a dreamy bower, as though sprites and fairies glided in gold over the undergrowth. Then Oannes tuned his roots again to Orus, and spoke: “Are ye another one of these tall standing, hollow trees that craves abundant light? To live in the light of the Sun alone and worship its gifts deliriously, and delirious, care naught but for its edifying light upon yer leaves? I’ve met many trees like that. All of them have fallen down or they turn, day by day, to snags, their woodrot rotten to the pith. Are ye like to such trees in that habit?” The yew’s words reached deep underground and resonated the shade of Orus, and he: “In truth, I resemble none of those trees. Though I’ve not met enough to know for sure. I come on behalf of my friends, the ferns and sorrel and flowering plants of my stand. Our soil is parched, and tall pines above ignore our cries for aid. Our entreaties are met with silence on Middle Hill, so I’ve come to the Sink seeking help. Water is what I need for my grove. What I can offer in return is goodwill and lasting alliance between our lands. An oath of plants to grow together and flourish for as long as plants to that oath stay true. Know I will honor it always, come fire or flood, desolation or plague. I hide no other motives in my crown, not yet full enough to house such designs for I’m not yet so far up from the ground.” “Not far up indeed,” said wise Oannes. “Nor politic enough to be a Mother Tree. Nor tall enough yet to speak on behalf of others, nor oath make, nor bond seal. In what alliances, then, can ye deal?” Orus replied, “In friendship and goodwill. In truth I only saw my friends and I in need, crowded as we are on the forest floor, with not enough space, nor enough water, and thought it might as well be me who makes the effort on their behalf, and because I thought it might work and other plants around me seemed to agree. In truth I wasn’t sure what would come. But now that I’m here, I’m willing to do whatever it takes, to strike whatever deal will satisfy my stand and yours mutually.” Oannes the yew said: “Whatever it takes? Do ye know all the ways that might be? Though ye sound like an honest good tree, I feel the maiden green of yer leaves. Ye flail with pliant trunk in the breeze. What ye seek requires sturdier resolve. But if that earnest will in ye strengthen and straighten thy young bole, ye may yet stand among the tallest and make yer case.” At this Orus exclaimed, “Oh wise old yew that’s exactly what I want! Make my case to the woods for the good of all. I want all flora to prosper, all fauna to thrive. If we can make a pact between us, to help each other in any way that we can, I know we could uplift every stand, every grove and bank in the land.” A smile creased the bark of Oannes. The cuffs of his peeling red bark curled. “Perhaps, redwood, ye will,” he said. “But how do ye suppose ye will proceed? The way is not so straight as it seems. There are many mischievous, unhappy trees who would use ye for their ends, would make a wasteland of yer woods and call it a home. Will ye offer pacts indiscriminately? Will ye not discern the bad from the good, and not refuse to commit harms that others out of malevolence and ignorance would? Driven like wraiths in thrall to wandering, unburdening themselves however they please. Likewise in ourselves are there those passions that, left unchecked, would warp our habits and bend our natures to their inveterate wills. Vice that corrupts the woods, erodes the roots. They beset the soul, and the woods, with ills. Will ye face such trials and not be bent?” And Orus, excited by what the Teacher said, answered quickly, and with zeal, “I’ve no idea! How does one discern the bad from the good? How does one tell what’s real in this neck of the woods? Will you teach me, great yew? I know you are a wise old tree, and I don’t have a clue where to begin. Will you teach me, please?” “Perhaps, In time, young redwood. But ye are not yet tall enough to see the forest for the trees. One day yer spirit will soar beyond yer body, as yer mind travels through the aetherous fields of earth. Gliding on the plane of the Green Spirit, ye will see the whole shape of our woods as they appear to the mountains from their summits. Then to thee the whole Watershed will be clear, from the top of Mount Sumeg to the mouth of the Creek that empties into the Sea. Until then, plant thyself firmly in the soil. Fix the foundations of thy woody home, so when the time comes to leave it, ye will find it unshaken, a bastion, a haven, upon your return. Bring the disparate organs of yer body into harmony with one another. Roots to anchor and mine for minerals. Pipelines of xylem and phloem to carry life-giving water and sweet-smelling sap. Branches to scaffold, buds affixed to leaves, those engines that harness the Holy Sun, that angle and aim our greens to breathe. Bolster yer walls with spring and summerwood to safeguard from the boring of beetles and stab of hungry birds. Lift up yer crown and around it draw an apron of bark to buttress the ravenous fires that steal life from plants, and make ashes of their hearts. Above all, know thy neighbors, redwood. The trees their manner of habit and speech. The shrubs the pains they take for their pleasure. The bear, the elk, the rodent, the bird, the newt, how each one takes and gives by turns. If ye learn reciprocity, and learn it at yer leisure, yer spirit will be as the Great Green’s, and yer habit the habit of Nature. But be wary of things too good to be true. Our Mother Tree of the Sink dresses his speech in pretty words. With his roots he makes many contrary pacts with plantlife in circuitous and confounding webs, and will just as soon cut the messy threads before the ignorant parties have grown wise. He alone remains privy to his plans. Be not so eager to entangle yerself with such trees before ye know their hearts or ye may fashion the chains of yer own imprisonment. Then, bound to another’s vision of the woods, ye would unwittingly serve their ends by their spiteful intent.” Orus listened to the yew speak long into autumn, until the ground grew cold and the voices of the Earth fell away. Plants in those months spoke less. Quieter, without strength as in the warmer seasons they had, in pathways of mycelia threading the forest floor together, they kept mostly to themselves, or kept to the company of their nearest neighbors. It was a time for reflection and for the preparation of things to come. A time for setting in order and for the planning of great labors.
This deserves high praise. It feels like it was written by Ents.
I like the conceit that the trees are communicating through their roots.
Some of the nicest touches are in the little bridge passages between sections of dialogue, such as this:
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The forest grew lively, bristling in the
river breeze, their roots and crowns aquiver
with intrigue.
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The whole poem feels like you are inside a forest.
The vocabulary demonstrates intimate acquaintance with the subject matter without feeling like you have raided a botanical dictionary.
The blank verse flows well and is poised right on the precarious ledge between being old-fashioned enough to suit this kind of tale, and contemporary enough to not sound archaic and wooden. Though there is still the occasional archaism I would avoid (like "ope" as a one syllable equivalent of "open", assuming that it is not a typo).
My positive impression is mostly based on the flow of the verse and the overall mood and effect created by the descriptive language. The narrative itself (and characterisation) works so far, but I can't judge it without seeing how it unfolds in the rest of the poem.
Been reading this in stages over the past few days . . . I am eager to have it in book form, so I can dogear it and mark it up liberally. Any idea when it'll be coming out?