I had to look up Fjällräven, but beside that, the various symbols of the trendy Californian lifestyle are both humorous and sad. I'm enjoying the story.
Very nice, Robert. I like all of the details your incorporated—they all ring true and I feel worked well to anchor the events in a particular context. (As an office worker myself, I saw a lot of my co-workers in the writing.)
I don’t see much narrative poetry on Substack - it’s refreshing! There’s a lot of lovely detail here too.
Thank you Thomas.
Only you can set Madysyn free, but to do so, you may have to set yourself free first. My guess is she ends up moonlighting as a Dominatrix.
Haha. I think that's a NY thing. Punishing brokers and traders who are dying to be humiliated.
I had to look up Fjällräven, but beside that, the various symbols of the trendy Californian lifestyle are both humorous and sad. I'm enjoying the story.
Thank you Tullius. I had to look up how to spell it. They were ubiquitous maybe ten years ago. Happy to hear you're enjoying it.
Love it Robert
Thank you MaryAnne!
Very nice, Robert. I like all of the details your incorporated—they all ring true and I feel worked well to anchor the events in a particular context. (As an office worker myself, I saw a lot of my co-workers in the writing.)