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I've read a lot of your work, and this stately, dignified piece is my favorite. It showcases your talents, interests, proclivities perfectly. I find myself reading it over and over. One quibble though (I specialize in those, as you know): As I read it, every word takes its essential and inevitable place, except one: that "so" before "commonplace." When I delete that word from my reading of the poem, It is much improved. Damned adverbs!

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